Ode on Business Travel – a poem for Friday

by Marcus on February 1, 2008

Here’s a happy little poem to commiserate with folks who find themselves away from family on travel. Travel has slowed down for me a bit lately, but last year I learned I don’t travel well.

Without further ado:

Ode on Business Travel

So many
days away
make life
gray—Spring
waters flow
clear at the source
Past roots
and grasses
and submerged
shrubs waving
their kracken-
like branches,
past muddy
banks where
hoof stirred
silt rises
in wisps
and clouds
the stream
opaque.

  • I often feel the same way. Business travel gets old doesn't it?
  • As always, love your poem. Especially the kracken-like branches. Great sounds throughout!
  • ESI and L.L., thanks. My poetry is so personal, I always hesitate a bit to post it. I'm glad it meant something to you.
  • Having replaced days in the saddle with days on the road I appreciate the "hoof stirred silt" part.
  • this takes me back to high school classroom days. thanks for sharing! it's quite pretty.
  • folks who find themselves away
    from family on travel give nice poem
    that one
  • Thanks, you know I was an exchange student in high school? Changed my life.
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