What I Learned From Writing…

…and Children, Television, Recreation, Relatives, Food, Pets, Automobiles, Bugs, and Bibles

You see, Robert Hruzek is hosting a group writing project where people write about a mash-up of 18 fun topics. I added bugs and Bibles to his list just for good measure and polished up a poem for his group. He says it’s the first ever poetry entry. Yea, me!

First, the poem itself. You can hear me read it on the Evoca recording, but you’ll have to skip ahead to 1:20 remaining because I get long winded in my intro. (Be sure to check out my sweet musical intro/outro. Royalty free audio is fun!)

Welcoming Summer

Two love bugs mate on my leg
Until I draw them off with this
#2 pencil. The pair crawls past
my thumb as I write—then up
to the pink eraser which must taste
funny to tongue buds on their feet.
They fly away, black-legged snow-
flakes. We think of Christmas specials
where painted children catch snow
on tongues to welcome winter.
“Open wide, kids,” I say. “There’s
never snow in South Texas.”
My son plays along and we run
up and down the blacktop lot—
heat rising in waves around us—
we must look a pair of Baptist Johns,
prophesying protein in the desert.
A voice of two calling between
parked cars: “Prepare the way
for summer bugs. Make straight
your tongues for them.” Push that
play too far and bugs become God.
All mankind finds salvation in bugs.
And why not? God can raise up
children from rocks and bugs—
even cars with bug-splattered bumpers.

Second, here’s how the poem fits the mash-up rules.

A few weeks ago, we drove (automobiles) to a family reunion (relatives) where my children and I found ourselves surrounded by bugs on our little vacation (recreation) to decorate the graveyard at the Hebron Baptist Church. In fact, the bugs were so thick, we talked about how it was like a blizzard of black snowflakes with legs. My son loved this because he keeps bugs as pets (which means he puts them in bug cages over-night and holds a daily funeral for the ones who don’t make it). You can see from the picture above what so many bugs do to a white car (automobile—again). The snowstorm made me think of the peanuts gang catching snow on their tongues (like food) in the television Christmas special. At that point, my mind took off, and I started writing this poem.

I have to ask, though. Who uses the word automobile anymore, Bob?

Also, Gordon, you asked about W. P. and decoration. I provide a long answer in the audio file above. And you can see W. P.’s grave there on the right. He is my kid’s great-great-great-great granddad. Or maybe just great-great-great, I can never remember.

One last thing about poetry. Bob’s project “What I Learned From…” suggests that I’ll have answers for you here. But poetry isn’t very good at providing answers in the traditional sense. Nevertheless, I hope you’ve found some things to think about in my mash-up of mashed-up of bibles, bugs on my windshield, the subsequent discussions that followed us that weekend, and Writing, Children, Television, Recreation, Relatives, Food, Pets, Automobiles.

8 comments ↓

#1 Robert Hruzek on 05.08.08 at 10:28 am

Very clever, my friend! I counted 6 of 18 topics - not bad! And congratulations on having the first-ever poetic entry to WILF (sound of crowd cheering)!

‘Course, I’ve never been too good at poetry, so I’m afraid most of it’s wasted on me. But I can sure picture those little boogers like black snowflakes, smearing their last moments across the front of my automobile (and my teeth, back in the days when I used to be a happy motorcyclist!)

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#2 Elizabeth Collier on 05.08.08 at 10:47 am

Way to go MG

#3 L.L. Barkat on 05.08.08 at 10:59 am

Daily funeral. Now that was an image that made me both laugh and catch my breath.

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#4 Marcus on 05.08.08 at 11:57 am

Thanks, Bob. You have your own kind of poetry of colloquialisms.

Elizabeth, we’re going to get our Laity Lodge podcast if it kills one of us.

L.L., like most poetic images, it was a slight exaggeration to mention DAILY funerals. But they are common and brief. Lyle says, “Look Dad. This bug’s dead now.” The end.

#5 L.L. Barkat on 05.08.08 at 7:20 pm

So, are you saying that… sometimes… you exaggerate in your poetry? Hmmm…

Now, just for the record, I wasn’t thinking daily casket, flowers, eulogy, hymns, pall bearers…

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#6 spaghettipie on 05.09.08 at 2:57 am

Okay, I’m totally cracking up that you posted that picture! And you are so clever with your poem. I wouldn’t even dream of trying after that!

#7 Robert Hruzek on 05.09.08 at 5:37 am

“Now, just for the record, I wasn’t thinking daily casket, flowers, eulogy, hymns, pall bearers…”

Hey, L.L., that’s exactly what I was thinking. Except, you know, really really tiny ones… :-D
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#8 Marcus on 05.09.08 at 8:46 am

L.L., exaggeration is the greatest joy of language.

spaghettipie, that picture doesn’t begin to do justice to the bugness of the car. I washed it yesterday and had to go to one of those super wash places. I literally could not get the bugs off with regular rags, soap, elbow grease.

Robert, we use match boxes if its a favorite bug. (Not really. That’s exaggeration, L.L. In Texas, we call it imagination.)

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