What Happens When You Combine Aslan, Lawn Art, and Steam Shovels?

You get a poem called “Garden of Stone and Flesh.” My attempt at blank verse for the time being.

Garden of Stone and Flesh

Frankie and Fran divorced and left a villa
in a culdesac. Fran’s weekend work bought the wrought
iron fence, each bar topped by a bulbous spike.
Frankie’s commission checks purchased a garden
of gray concrete statues, a Parthenon mass-
produced for discount home improvement stores.
Lions flanking the driveway sphyxed Aunt Jane
walking by, her dog pulling at the leash to escape
the strangle of concrete riddles. Benches
like empty thrones sat in the yard waiting
for some gardening god to rest, the cold stone
a shock to any divine backside. Concrete
deer and elephants, frogs and gnomes, and a mermaid
and children with stone stares missing pupils,
lacking focus. Static gods, immutable, hard.
Not like Fran’s children who changed despite her love.
Not like Frankie whose heart wandered where his eyes looked.
Not like Fran whose eyes turned to stone, pupils empty,
cold and alone in a garden of mass-produced idols
where no children played, where no couple loved
to imagine new figures filling each patch
of empty grass so the house sold in settlement.
The new owners’ children play “father time”
with hammers, knocking off noses and arms and heads
until dad wraps a rusty chain around each
statue’s neck and drags them one by one
behind his riding mower out to the curb
next to the trash cans and recycle bins and mail.
A week later his kids watched bulk pick up
park and scoop the pile with hydrolic jaws
“Like Mike Mulligan’s steam shovel,” said their dad.
“Or Aslan,” said his oldest. “An evil Aslan,” thought dad,
“who holds his breath and eats Narnias dead.”
The youngest son’s wide brown eyes watched each gray
body fall in the truck with a crash of dust.
And dad wondered what life could hide in stone.


4 comments ↓

#1 Ally on 05.24.07 at 12:59 pm

“wide brown eyes watched each gray
body fall in the truck with a crash of dust.”

I love this… how crashes are supposed to be loud and heavy, and the dust is silent - but it floats away to infiltrate other places.. I don’t know what I’m trying to say, I just love the image. This is great.

#2 L.L. Barkat on 05.24.07 at 1:19 pm

Brilliant. I love the movement of time. There’s a poignancy in that.

#3 Shep on 05.25.07 at 6:03 pm

You hooked me with…

in a culdesac. Fran’s weekend work bought the wrought iron fence, each bar topped with a bulbous spike.

There’s a whole novel in that one line. But I have to ask, where did this come from?

#4 Marcus on 05.25.07 at 8:26 pm

I can’t say exactly where it came from. But I can tell you the image had it’s genesis in a house near Amy’s childhood neighborhood that used to have a tremendous concrete statue garden.

The poetic answer is that this poem must have come from the same place all “new” creation comes from—that same “Heav’nly Muse” who helped Milton sing

“Of Man’s First Disobedience, and the Fruit
Of that Forbidden Tree, whose mortal taste
Brought Death into the World, and all our woe,
With loss of Eden, till one greater Man
Restore us, and regain the blissful Seat…”