Mount Hermon Reminds Me Who Walks on Water - a poem

Here’s the poem I worked on last week. It’s just 8 lines–technically an octave–so it may be an incomplete sonnet. (Sonnets are one octave, followed by a sestet to make a total of 14 lines.)

I can’t decide if this one has more to say or not. Amy says it’s done. At the risk of writing poetry by committee, what do you think?
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